ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC34 N0xxx
ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC34/WG2 N195

ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC34/WG2

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TITLE: Japanese additional comments on TR 19758/DAM1 and DAM2
SOURCE: Japan
PROJECT: IDs: tr19758a1 and tr19758a2
PROJECT EDITOR:
STATUS: Informal comments
ACTION:
DATE: 2004-09-24
DISTRIBUTION: SC34/WG2 and Liaisons
REFER TO:
REPLY TO: Dr. Yushi Komachi, ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34/WG2 Convener
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Mr. G. Ken Holman, ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34 Secretariat
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Dr. James David Mason, ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34 Chairman
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Japanese additional comments on TR 19758/DAM1 and DAM2


1. Additional comments on TR 19758/DAM1


[1] 4.4.1, figure A1.1
Remove the description "Deleted: <sp>"

[2] 4.4.1, para.2
The description "However, it is difficult to flow ..." should be "It is difficult to flow ...".

[3] page 3
The "okuri" and "gyosu" should be replaced with "linefeed" and "linenumber" respectively.

[4] 4.18.4, para.1
The para.1 should be replaced with:
Table header column <THC> and table header row <THR> should be defined as siblings of table column 
<TC> and table row <TR> respectively. The table header column and table header row should have the 
same children as table column and table row respectively, and initially be specified with their 
background color of light-gray, as shown in figure A1.3. 

[5] 4.18.5, para.1
The para.1 should be replaced with:
Multiple table cell <MTD> should be defined as siblings of table-cell <TD>, and have its children; row string 
<RSTR> and column string <CSTR>. The row string includes #PCDATA which are related to row data. The colomn 
string includes #PCDATA which are related to column data.

[6] 4.18.5, para.2
The para.2 should be replaced with:
The multiple table cell with the following sepcification will be rendered as shown at the top-left cell of 
figure A1.4. 



2. Additional comments on TR 19758/DAM2


[1] The description

Page 70, Clause 9
Replace the exisiting un-ordered list specification to following pecification:
  (define (bullet bullet-str)
    (make paragraph
      (literal bullet-str)

should be replaced with the description

Page 54, Clause 9
Replace the exisiting un-ordered list specification:
  (element (UL LI) (LIST-ELEMENT
    (case (modulo (length (hierarchical-number-recursive "UL")) 4)
      ((1) "-")
      ......
  )))

with the following pecification:
  ;  <!ENTITY % ISOpub PUBLIC
  ;   "ISO 8879:1986//ENTITIES Publishing//EN">

  (define (bullet)
    (make paragraph
      (literal "&bull;")
  ))



3. Issue to be reminded on TR 19758/DAM2


;; Note Following specification is temporary specification for dropcap using table.
;; this specification will be replaced to amended characteristics provided by
;; ISO/IEC 10179 Amendment2

(define (dropcap scale num str width)
  ;; width is number of characters in one line
  (let* ((len (string-length str))
         (fsize (* *font-size* scale))
         (b (* (- width (* scale num)) scale))
         (a (if (< b len) (+ b num) len))
        )
    (make table
      (make table-column width: (* fsize num))
      (make table-column)
      (make table-row
        (make table-cell
          (make paragraph
            line-spacing: (if (< *line-spacing* fsize) fsize *line-spacing*)
            font-size: fsize
            (literal (substring str 0 num))))
        (make table-cell
          (make paragraph
            (literal (substring str num a)))))
      (make table-row
        (make table-cell
          n-columns-spanned: 2
          (make paragraph
            (literal (substring str a len)))))
      )))